Changes: Jedi Order

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This is Yoggie project, please don't edit it i you don't have the permission. This Jedi Order is different from Star Wars Jedi Order.

History

Jedi Order was found by Grand Master K'Raamar around 1.500.000 BPW. It is first formed to establish order in Vordiuox universe. In that time, the whole multiverse is well know about them. Almost 20 year after the founding, K'Raamar devolped the way of the force and with the help of Acteryan blcksmith, he create lightsaber. The new Jedi Order only have 30 Jedi in the first time but the Tuskan Council support their action and with only short time, they have almost 400 new Jedi. But with their justice ideology, they also make many foe. But again, only with short period time they have establish justice over universe.

First Jedi War

In 1.499.940 BPW, the Jedi had a great conflict with Valanorican. First, the Jedi had sent a massanger to Planet Valacor. Because the Valanorican had already sick to face the Jedi false treaty, The Valanorican killed not only the massanger but a whole Jedi legion along with the ship's crew. Knowing this, Grand Master K'Raamar doesn't act anything. Beside he wants to send another massanger. The Tuskan Council saw the lack of leadership within Master K'Ramaar so they made another decision. The Counsil then want to form an army with purpose to invaded the Valacor. Master K'Raamar knowing this and decide to stop their invasion. But he remember that within his position, the Council decision cannot be debate. The Council didn't know about the Valacor hidden superweapon, a creature without name with shape like a dragon. Not only that, Valanorican also have more greater technology than the Council expected. Their real battle experience can't be equated with the Jedi. When the Jedi came into Valacor, The Valanorican made a massacre. They killed almost 120 Jedi with almost 896 the Council army. One of the Jedi general, General Vertrand, made an ambush into Viha'ra city and took the city with a great battle. The Jedi has made a fortress in that city before they can took the whole planet. But the most terrifying technology of Valanorican is to made a powerful Neo-Being or a living organism with a very special fire like Pyrokinesis, Cryokinesis, or even Heliokinesis. After a long 500 years war, many famous Jedi have fallen including Grand Master K'Raamar and General Vertrand. Finally the Jedi have met the leader of Valanorican, Ish'bar. Ish'bar have abllity to control the solar or Heliokinesis. With his power he almost killed everyone on Valacor planet by making a large solare flare from it's nearest star. But by an act from a brave Jedi name Ratoclas, he stab Ish,bar and saved everyone on Valacor. By the end of the war, the Council has choose master Xeron to become the Grand Master of the Jedi.

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 ==History==
-Jedi Order was found by Grand Master K'Raamar around 1.500.000 BPW. It is first formed to establish order in Vordiuox universe. In that time, the whole multiverse is well known abou them. Almost 20 year after the founding, K'Raamar devolped the way of the force and with the help of Acteryan blcksmith, he create lightsaber. The new Jedi Order only have 30 Jedi in the first time but the Tuskan Council support their action and with only short time, they have almost 400 new Jedi. But with their justice ideology, they also make many foe. But again, only with short period time they have establish justice over universe.
+Jedi Order was found by Grand Master K'Raamar around 1.500.000 BPW. It is first formed to establish order in Vordiuox universe. In that time, the whole multiverse is well know about them. Almost 20 year after the founding, K'Raamar devolped the way of the force and with the help of Acteryan blcksmith, he create lightsaber. The new Jedi Order only have 30 Jedi in the first time but the Tuskan Council support their action and with only short time, they have almost 400 new Jedi. But with their justice ideology, they also make many foe. But again, only with short period time they have establish justice over universe.
 ===First Jedi War===
-In 1.499.940 BPW, the Jedi had a great conflict with Valanorican. First, the Jedi had sent a massanger to Planet Valacor. Because the Valanorican had already sick to face the Jedi false treaty, The Valanorican killed not only the massanger but a whole Jedi legion along with the ship's crew. Knowing this, Grand Master K'Raamar doesn't act anything. Beside he wants to send another massanger. The Tuskan Council saw the lack of leadership within Master K'Ramaar so they made another decision. The Counsil then want to form an army with purpose to invaded the Valacor. Master K'Raamar knowing this and decide to stop their invasion. But he remember that within his position, the Council decision cannot be debate. The Council didn't know about the Valacor hidden superweapon, a creature without name with shape like a dragon. Not only that, Valanorican also have more greater technology than the Council expected. Their real battle experience can't be equated with the Jedi. When the Jedi came into Valacor, The Valanorican made a massacre. They killed almost 120 Jedi with almost 896 the Council army. One of the Jedi general, General Vertrand, made an ambush into Viha'ra city and took the city with a great battle. The Jedi has made a fortress in that city before they can took the whole planet. But the most terryfieng technology of Valanorican is to made a powerful Neo-Being or a living organism with a very special fire like Pyrokinesis, Cryokinesis, or even Heliokinesis.
+In 1.499.940 BPW, the Jedi had a great conflict with Valanorican. First, the Jedi had sent a massanger to Planet Valacor. Because the Valanorican had already sick to face the Jedi false treaty, The Valanorican killed not only the massanger but a whole Jedi legion along with the ship's crew. Knowing this, Grand Master K'Raamar doesn't act anything. Beside he wants to send another massanger. The Tuskan Council saw the lack of leadership within Master K'Ramaar so they made another decision. The Counsil then want to form an army with purpose to invaded the Valacor. Master K'Raamar knowing this and decide to stop their invasion. But he remember that within his position, the Council decision cannot be debate. The Council didn't know about the Valacor hidden superweapon, a creature without name with shape like a dragon. Not only that, Valanorican also have more greater technology than the Council expected. Their real battle experience can't be equated with the Jedi. When the Jedi came into Valacor, The Valanorican made a massacre. They killed almost 120 Jedi with almost 896 the Council army. One of the Jedi general, General Vertrand, made an ambush into Viha'ra city and took the city with a great battle. The Jedi has made a fortress in that city before they can took the whole planet. But the most terrifying technology of Valanorican is to made a powerful Neo-Being or a living organism with a very special fire like Pyrokinesis, Cryokinesis, or even Heliokinesis. After a long 500 years war, many famous Jedi have fallen including Grand Master K'Raamar and General Vertrand. Finally the Jedi have met the leader of Valanorican, Ish'bar. Ish'bar have abllity to control the solar or Heliokinesis. With his power he almost killed everyone on Valacor planet by making a large solare flare from it's nearest star. But by an act from a brave Jedi name Ratoclas, he stab Ish,bar and saved everyone on Valacor. By the end of the war, the Council has choose master Xeron to become the Grand Master of the Jedi.
 '''ANYONE WHO WANT TO CONTINUE THE STORY, PLEASE FEEL FREE. BUT DON'T REPLACE THE IDEA OF THE STORY THAT I HAVE JUST CREATED. ALSO YOU CAN VOTE IF THE STORY I HAVE CREATED IS A GOOD STORY OR NOT, LEAC=VE YOUR MASSAGE IN MY TALK PAGE. THANK YOU'''